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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 01:29 PM
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It's too long to post here in the forum, but thanks to MacFive and his hard work on behalf of us HR junkies, you can read it here on my WebPage.

Comments, feedback, criticism and donations ( laugh.gif ) are welcomed.


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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 02:22 PM
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That was a wonderful story, Randal! Great job!!


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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 02:48 PM
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One word comes to mind, haunting; definitely a haunting story.


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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 03:09 PM
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O'siyo gtrplr,
~ Wonderful and entertaining story indeed! rolleyes.gif I do have one question..how did the clean, pressed red ribbon become bloody when pulled from his pocket? unsure.gif Is the reader suppose to believe that when he was 'shot' thats when the ribbon became blood-stained?..Just curious! A story that kept my attention! Great job!
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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 03:30 PM
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O'siyo gtrplr,
~ Wonderful and entertaining story indeed! rolleyes.gif I do have one question..how did the clean, pressed red ribbon become bloody when pulled from his pocket? unsure.gif Is the reader suppose to believe that when he was 'shot' thats when the ribbon became blood-stained?..Just curious! A story that kept my attention! Great job!
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Well, that's one explanation. Perhaps the ribbon he pulled from his pocket was the one the landlord's daughter was wearing when she died. Or. . .perhaps someone else will come up with a better explanation. biggrin.gif

Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you all enjoyed it.
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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 05:59 PM
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Excellent story! Keep up the craft and let is in on any upcoming works!


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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 09:28 PM
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Wonderful angle on the story smile.gif I like it! Great retelling smile.gif Only thing I saw, maybe it was just me, but a little bit of the dialouge near the beginning got a little too heavy on the 'he said' 'said he' feel. Didn't last long though smile.gif Nice work! Great story! Definately kept me reading, and some interesting twists in it.


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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 11:40 PM
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That was a wonderful story. Hope you don't mind I printed it and will read to my boys. Keep up the good work! book.gif
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*turns on Loreena McKennit's "highwayman"*

gotta tell ya.
I enjoyed the story very much. the way it was told, the use of accents, the twilight zone feel to it was all very nice.
It is a very well done piece




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