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Posted: 10-Jun-2008, 06:40 PM
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If I should write a song for you
would it make you want to sing?
Would you tap your foot and hum along
as notes flowed from the strings?
Would you understand the feelings
that the tune was meant to bring?
If I should write a song for you
would it make you want to sing?

If I should write a poem for you
would it captivate your mind?
Would you take it at face value
or would you read between the lines?
Would you search for hidden meanings
or for thoughts left undefined?
If I should write a poem for you
would it captivate your mind?

If I should give my love to you
would you hold it close to heart?
Yours I would it's understood
hold treasured from the start.
Keep it guarded and protected
like some priceless work of art.
If I should give my love to you
would you hold it close to heart?

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Posted: 10-Jun-2008, 09:29 PM
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John Clements 
Posted: 11-Jun-2008, 07:09 AM
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Thatís a sweet poem, well done Celt.
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Posted: 11-Jun-2008, 02:46 PM
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Celt, excellent, Thanks,
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Posted: 11-Jun-2008, 05:55 PM
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Celt,

Well,from a lady's point of view, your poem is a very romantic one.
It's almost a declaration of love. It is very deep indeed and very touching. You could win a lady's heart with this kind of poem.
I am always amazed and fascinated by what a man can put into words.

This is an excellent poem thank you for sharing.
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