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Camac
Posted: 21-Apr-2008, 05:32 PM
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Many times did I love
But no one like you
None as deep
None as true
It ended one day
For we drifted apart
Each to go separate
Two broken Hearts
Each in our hurt
Lashed out to cause pain
Widening the gap
Never touching again

And now as life closes
I dream of those days
The long loving nights
The laughter the tears
The birth of our Daughters
The pleasures, the fears,
The sadness of partings
The joy of returning
The warmth of your touch
The Love ever burning

"Tis memories now
As the sands trickle down
The hourglass nigh empty
And the dreams start to fade
I loved you then
And Love you I do
No other so deep
No other so True.
               
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Posted: 21-Apr-2008, 06:20 PM
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Camac,
I wish I could be near you and strong enough and give you a hug so big
(without cracking your ribs of course) that it could take away the sorrow in your heart. But I know some deep wounds just can't heal no matter what. And on the spur of the moment things happens and sadly realize it when too late.

Thank you for sharing that beautiful poem of deep love and sorrow. LOA


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Posted: 21-Apr-2008, 06:39 PM
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My lady of Avalon;

Thank you for the heartfelt response. It has been 25 years this month that my marriage ended. Neither one of us got a divorce, maybe we should have because the pain would not have lasted this long. It is strange but we have both tried to move on and had other partners but it never seems to last. Thank you again.

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Posted: 22-Apr-2008, 07:35 AM
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QUOTE (Camac @ 21-Apr-2008, 05:32 PM)
Many times did I love
But no one like you
None as deep
None as true
It ended one day
For we drifted apart
Each to go separate
Two broken Hearts
Each in our hurt
Lashed out to cause pain
Widening the gap
Never touching again

And now as life closes
I dream of those days
The long loving nights
The laughter the tears
The birth of our Daughters
The pleasures, the fears,
The sadness of partings
The joy of returning
The warmth of your touch
The Love ever burning

"Tis memories now
As the sands trickle down
The hourglass nigh empty
And the dreams start to fade
I loved you then
And Love you I do
No other so deep
No other so True.

Dear Camac, divorce is certainly something not to be made light of, but if you do ever get one, (Iíll marry you myself). Just kidding of course, but not about the poem, itís both said and lovely rolled into one.

Thanks, JC


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Posted: 22-Apr-2008, 08:14 AM
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JC.

Thanks for the offer. Next time around if I'm recycled as a woman I'll take you up on it. I was saying to some of our fellowship that I was going to take a break from writing poetry but I find myself unable to put the pen down can't bide an idle brain.


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Posted: 22-Apr-2008, 08:20 AM
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That was so beautiful. Thank-you for sharing it with us.


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Posted: 22-Apr-2008, 10:32 AM
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dang, such a longtime to have longings. Thx Camac again for sharing


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Posted: 22-Apr-2008, 01:39 PM
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Thanks for sharing this poem. You can tell it is from the heart.

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Posted: 22-Apr-2008, 06:51 PM
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QUOTE (Camac @ 22-Apr-2008, 09:14 AM)
I was saying to some of our fellowship that I was going to take a break from writing poetry but I find myself unable to put the pen down can't bide an idle brain.

Camac.

I thought so... wink.gif

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Posted: 23-Apr-2008, 11:00 AM
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LOA;

I was talking to my Aunt and it seems she has kept some of my poems from back when. Also my oldest Paula says she thinks she has some. If both are correct I will see what they have and if any good will post them. Some are from back in the 60s' and 70s'


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Posted: 23-Apr-2008, 09:02 PM
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Camac,
I think I've awakened something that was sleeping eh! And that's great you know. I think when sorrow or loneliness or happiness, any mood for that matter, need to be express somehow there is nothing better than putting it into words. I do so just for the release of physical pain mostly.
But for somebody else it could be freedom of speach or for you it's the longing of your beloved birth country.

Well I'm off to bed now for I have two hard days work ahead waiting for me.

Can't wait to hear more from you.Thanks,LOA
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Posted: 24-Apr-2008, 02:23 PM
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LOA

After considerable inner debate I have decided to take a hiatus from writing poetry and concentrate on writing a History of my family at the request of a cousin in Scotland. I will offer the occasional poem now and then but the history will have priority as she is compiling the same from her side. I have promised to have most of it completed by the beginning of August. Fear not Dear Lady I will not let my number one fan down.

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Posted: 24-Apr-2008, 07:00 PM
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Hi Camac,
What an interesting endeavor.I am sure it'll be quite the challenge for you to write the history of your family.

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Posted: 27-Apr-2008, 09:34 AM
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LOA;
I wrote this in Oct. 70 a few days after my oldest was born. Thought it had been lost but it seems my ex kept it and some others gave them to Paula and Shannon.
Paula
Hello little one
With the deep blue eyes
Scrunched up face
And tiny nose.
You lay there before me
All bundled in pink
A stealer of Hearts
A Rascal I think.
I stand there looking
All proud and aglow
That's my daughter
I boast so others will know
You lay there and take it
All in with a grin
I've hooked him now
I'll just reel him in
He'll struggle and fight
But he knows he has lost
When it comes to his Heart
I'll be the Boss.
A front he'll put up
All stern and abrupt
But I'll just smile a smile
And laugh when he jumps.
Well little one
I just read your mind
I'm on to you now and
I know your kind.
Your Father I am
And always will be
So be done with your tricks
They won't work on me.

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Posted: 28-Apr-2008, 02:08 PM
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So who was forewarned and forearmed here, daughter or dad!!??!! laugh.gif
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