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Celtic Radio Community > Poems > 'Nowhere To Go But Up'


Posted by: RealtaRinceoir 23-Dec-2011, 01:00 PM
I would love some critiques on this poem!

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From nothing, something
From chaos, order
From crushing defeat, victory

From here, there's nowhere to go but up

Rising from the ashes of obscurity
To the flames of joyous victory
That's what so many hope to achieve

From the bottom, there's nowhere to go but up

From an idea, reality
From a hope, victory
From beginners, champions

We had nowhere to go but up

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