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Posted by: Camac 31-Jul-2008, 11:20 AM
Two Loves have I
So far apart
In distance and in time
One gave me Birth
The other Life
Which one do I
Call Home?

The old is shrouded
In the Mist of Tme
The other is quite young
These two great seperate
Lands I speak
Each hold a part of me.
The old one holds
My very Soul
The other holds
MY Heart
The Blue and White
Meet Red and White
Within my very core.

I fear the pull
Will not resolve
Until the end of me
For caught Betwixt
Two Loves am I
Like flotsam on the sea.

Posted by: John Clements 31-Jul-2008, 12:06 PM
QUOTE (Camac @ 31-Jul-2008, 12:20 PM)
Two Loves have I
So far apart
In distance and in time
One gave me Birth
The other Life
Which one do I
Call Home?

The old is shrouded
In the Mist of Tme
The other is quite young
These two great seperate
Lands I speak
Each hold a part of me.
The old one holds
My very Soul
The other holds
MY Heart
The Blue and White
Meet Red and White
Within my very core.

I fear the pull
Will not resolve
Until the end of me
For caught Betwixt
To Loves am I
Like flotsam on the sea.

You must lay awake at night Dave? Good one.
JC

Posted by: Lady of Avalon 31-Jul-2008, 05:38 PM
That's very deep this one and very moving.At least you can be proud to belong in both of them because you are certain of your roots.
For myself it's only wishful thinking for I don't know where my roots are from.

A very good poem indeed.

LOA

Posted by: Camac 31-Jul-2008, 05:59 PM
QUOTE (Lady of Avalon @ 31-Jul-2008, 06:38 PM)
That's very deep this one and very moving.At least you can be proud to belong in both of them because you are certain of your roots.
For myself it's only wishful thinking for I don't know where my roots are from.

A very good poem indeed.

LOA

LOA;

Your Roots are in the Rockies, the Prairies, the Great Lakes, St. Lawrence Valley,and in the Tundra. they are planted deep and firm in the soil of the Greatest place on Earth. CANADA.



Camac.

Posted by: Lady of Avalon 31-Jul-2008, 06:08 PM
I wish I could say that for certain.
You know this is something that I made my husband discover, his roots, which he never really thought about them as important or just not thought of it at all.
Until I told him one day that he was very lucky to know where he was from unlike me that though I love my parents and family, I am not of their blood.

Roots are important in one's life so that one knows and feels he or she belongs.

LOA

Posted by: John Clements 31-Jul-2008, 06:32 PM
QUOTE (Lady of Avalon @ 31-Jul-2008, 07:08 PM)
I wish I could say that for certain.
You know this is something that I made my husband discover, his roots, which he never really thought about them as important or just not thought of it at all.
Until I told him one day that he was very lucky to know where he was from unlike me that though I love my parents and family, I am not of their blood.

Roots are important in one's life so that one knows and feels he or she belongs.

LOA

LOA; I think you belongs where ever you happend to be, and as for roots, set your owne.
JC

Posted by: Camac 31-Jul-2008, 06:51 PM
QUOTE (John Clements @ 31-Jul-2008, 07:32 PM)
QUOTE (Lady of Avalon @ 31-Jul-2008, 07:08 PM)
I wish I could say that for certain.
You know this is something that I made my husband discover, his roots, which he never really thought about them as important or just not thought of it at all.
Until I told him one day that he was very lucky to know where he was from unlike me that though I love my parents and family, I am not of their blood.

Roots are important in one's life so that one knows and feels he or she belongs.

LOA

LOA; I think you belongs where ever you happend to be, and as for roots, set your owne.
JC

JC.

They say about we Scots that where ever we roam and settle down there is Scotland.

Camac.

Posted by: Lady of Avalon 01-Aug-2008, 11:19 AM
QUOTE (John Clements @ 31-Jul-2008, 08:32 PM)
LOA;
I think you belongs where ever you happend to be, and as for roots, set your own.
JC

That's one way of thinking but I say it always depends on how in one's life things were for that person.
One would never know until one wore the other's shoe or been in the other's situation.
Thanks for the slap in the back John.

smile.gif LOA

Posted by: Teriodin 22-Aug-2008, 07:26 AM
I served in the forces once for six years and thoroughly missed my homeland, as I was posted far from Scotland, so I have an inkling of what that separation feels like.

Nice poem Camac, and a nice sentiment.

Posted by: Leelee 22-Aug-2008, 09:11 AM
You've outdone yourself once again, Camac......Beautiful. thumbs_up.gif I'll look forward to reading more of your poetry smile.gif

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