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i am new to this site, kinda, so when i saw and read all the great poems i felt at home. as long as i can remember i have been writing poetry. this is a poem i wrote after the only boy i have ever loved left me for my best friend. after he left all i could feel was pain. this poem shows how i felt.
Consequences
To long time seemed to wait
Longer was the love we shared
But desire will, like the stars, break on the awakening sun
I will never forget the true us
Look then for his laughter to end in the raining fire from heaven
For he crashed our love that floated for the longest time
Until he found another
please let me know what you think about this poem. i welcome any tips or comments about me poetry. thank you. |
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