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Camac
Posted: 06-Oct-2008, 07:35 AM
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What Madness this
To enclose ones' soul
To build defences strong
Pitfall traps that
None may cross
For those who dare
The cold stone wall.
What Tower do
These engines guard
What Treasure held within?

None, they are but
Shields to keep
At bay the
Hurt and pain
That dawns each day.
To hold afar those
Who would reach out
To offer Love then
Recoil, in puzzled doubt.

Want no Love
For with it Pain
'Tis better then
In a Fortress reign?
To let the World
Rush Frentic pass
While to Aloneness
There cling fast.



               
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Posted: 06-Oct-2008, 09:01 AM
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QUOTE (Camac @ 06-Oct-2008, 07:35 AM)
What Madness this
To enclose ones' soul
To build defences strong
Pitfall traps that
None may cross
For those who dare
The cold stone wall.
What Tower do
These engines guard
What Treasure held within?

None, they are but
Shields to keep
At bay the
Hurt and pain
That dawns each day.
To hold afar those
Who would reach out
To offer Love then
Recoil, in puzzled doubt.

Want no Love
For with it Pain
'Tis better then
In a Fortress reign?
To let the World
Rush Frentic pass
While to Aloneness
There cling fast.

Isolation, circle the wagons, positions poses, defend to the death.
(Am I making any sense here? You know, Iím not sure anymore?)
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Posted: 06-Oct-2008, 09:24 AM
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Very well written, Camac. I believe we all put on our armour & defenses to avoid being hurt. Although, one shouldn't do this too often, as it does drive people away that truely could be a blessing in one's life.....then it's too late and they are gone.


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Posted: 06-Oct-2008, 06:42 PM
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Reminds me of Paul Simon's "I Am A Rock." Just as bleak -- though well crafted and evocative. I hope it's not totally true to Camac and his ways -- surely isn't good for the heart? sad.gif
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Posted: 06-Oct-2008, 07:03 PM
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No tis not me in the least. Although being alone does not bother me I do not make a habit of it. There are times when I revell in it because it allows me to think deeply and gives me a respite from the world.


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Posted: 26-Oct-2008, 06:59 PM
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I hope so my friend that this melancholic poem does not reflect you.
Though I do agree with it in part and all need to build an exterior either for the sake of privacy or for whatever reason but it is not good for one's soul to live around a wall.

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