Very nicely written, I do hope to see more of your writings here and Welcome to Celtic Hearts. I'm Angel, I am the Celtic Hearts Guide / Moderator. If you have any questions or need any help please don't hesitate to send me an IM or an email.
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| Posted by: rosehill_32 08-Oct-2004, 03:30 PM |
| The Broken Rainbow I saw a rainbow In the light sky Floating there While birds fly No rain had come Down where I sat No rain but only A rainbow?s hat It was broken Into pieces One, two, three For all to see Clouds covering The broken parts Wondering how To put it together now? It was beautiful In the summer sky I wanted to go up And touch it?so high! I wanted to climb The rainbow stairs And find the village Of rainbow people I wanted to taste Those enchanted delights To witness the sky?s Changing colors from above But I was down here Waiting patiently below As I drove through wet roads On my way home On my way home I wondered how I saw a rainbow Broken into parts! By Rose Hill Sept. 14, 2004 |
| Posted by: susieq76 08-Oct-2004, 03:32 PM |
| Neat! Welcome to Highlander Radio, rosehill_32 (by the way)! |
| Posted by: Angel Whitefang (Rider) 09-Oct-2004, 03:03 PM |
| Rosehill_32, Very nicely written, I do hope to see more of your writings here and Welcome to Celtic Hearts. I'm Angel, I am the Celtic Hearts Guide / Moderator. If you have any questions or need any help please don't hesitate to send me an IM or an email. |
| Posted by: cori 10-Oct-2004, 12:58 PM |
That is a lovely poem. I like the pictures you paint with the words.  |