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I've Written A Story!, and I'd love for you to read it!

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gtrplr	Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 12:29 PM
Celtic Guardian Group: Founder Posts: 1,216 Joined: 22-Jan-2004 Zodiac: Birch Realm: Nashville, TN	It's too long to post here in the forum, but thanks to MacFive and his hard work on behalf of us HR junkies, you can read it here on my WebPage. Comments, feedback, criticism and donations ( ) are welcomed. -------------------- Randal Smith alias Smitty the Kid Wielder of the Six-String Claymore! "We have enough Youth, how about a Fountain of Smart?" "When the going gets tough, the smart go fishing!"

susieq76	Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 01:22 PM
Queen of the Stars Group: Ireland Posts: 1,259 Joined: 13-Aug-2003 Zodiac: Vine Realm: Middle o' North Carolina	That was a wonderful story, Randal! Great job!! -------------------- "Alas for those who never sing and die with all their music left in them" - Oliver Wendell Holmes

TheCarolinaScotsman	Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 01:48 PM
Celtic Guardian Group: Celtic Nation Posts: 2,509 Joined: 13-Jun-2003 Zodiac: Birch Realm: North Carolina Medieval Kingdom Rank #76 41,453 Gold!	One word comes to mind, haunting; definitely a haunting story. -------------------- TheCarolinaScotsman Ya'll drive safe and come back soon.

freekenny	Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 02:09 PM
Celtic Guardian Group: Celtic Nation Posts: 724 Joined: 07-Jul-2004 Zodiac: Willow Realm: Beaches of North Carolina & Mountains of Kentucky	O'siyo gtrplr, ~ Wonderful and entertaining story indeed! I do have one question..how did the clean, pressed red ribbon become bloody when pulled from his pocket? Is the reader suppose to believe that when he was 'shot' thats when the ribbon became blood-stained?..Just curious! A story that kept my attention! Great job! ~~Sty-U -------------------- I always knew one day I would travel this road;I just did not know that today would be the day.... 'Each man is good in his sight. It is not necessary for eagles to be crows' --Sitting Bull 'Why do you take by force what you could obtain by love?' --Powhatan 'HeartAches mend, HeartBreaks are everlasting'-- my own quote, seeker

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Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 02:30 PM

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O'siyo gtrplr,
~ Wonderful and entertaining story indeed! rolleyes.gif I do have one question..how did the clean, pressed red ribbon become bloody when pulled from his pocket? unsure.gif Is the reader suppose to believe that when he was 'shot' thats when the ribbon became blood-stained?..Just curious! A story that kept my attention! Great job!
~~Sty-U red_bandana.gif

Well, that's one explanation. Perhaps the ribbon he pulled from his pocket was the one the landlord's daughter was wearing when she died. Or. . .perhaps someone else will come up with a better explanation.

Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

Haldur	Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 04:59 PM
Celtic Guardian Group: Celtic Nation Posts: 537 Joined: 04-Jan-2004 Zodiac: Willow Realm: Grayson, KY	Excellent story! Keep up the craft and let is in on any upcoming works! -------------------- Haldr, Traveller of the Great Forest "After all is said and done, a lot more will be said than done." - Unknown

Aaediwen	Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 08:28 PM
Celtic Guardian Group: Super Moderator Posts: 3,069 Joined: 09-Oct-2003 Zodiac: Holly Realm: Kentucky	Wonderful angle on the story I like it! Great retelling Only thing I saw, maybe it was just me, but a little bit of the dialouge near the beginning got a little too heavy on the 'he said' 'said he' feel. Didn't last long though Nice work! Great story! Definately kept me reading, and some interesting twists in it. -------------------- Poet and seeker of knowledge

Rindy	Posted: 21-Dec-2004, 10:40 PM
Braveheart Member Group: Celtic Nation Posts: 128 Joined: 27-Jan-2004 Zodiac: Birch	That was a wonderful story. Hope you don't mind I printed it and will read to my boys. Keep up the good work!

urian	Posted: 03-Jan-2005, 05:15 PM
heretic. lurker in the shadows Group: Scotland Posts: 1,546 Joined: 08-May-2004 Zodiac: Hazel Realm: Texas	turns on Loreena McKennit's "highwayman" gotta tell ya. I enjoyed the story very much. the way it was told, the use of accents, the twilight zone feel to it was all very nice. It is a very well done piece . -------------------- 'Dying for being different is still better than living as a Sheep'-anon

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