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| Posted by: AhilissaMay 12-Jun-2004, 02:24 PM |
| Please tell me what you think Everything I Have Everything I have Is like Water In the letters I write In the words I say Everything I have Is a flame of fire Glowing brighter with love Fadeing with uncertenity Everything I have Is like time Going by fast and slow Everything I have Is You |
| Posted by: Aaediwen 12-Jun-2004, 03:01 PM |
| Nice. I expected line 2 and 4 of the second stanza to rhyme as I read it, but they don't. |
| Posted by: greenldydragon 12-Jun-2004, 04:31 PM |
| I like it. |