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Posted by: Shadows 06-Sep-2004, 09:13 PM
I pause,

scratch my chin,

wonder aloud.

Visions dance,

minds wander,

and the world goes on.

How,

why,

and should it be ?

Peace?

War?

Humanity?

Visions Dance!

Dance with me.

Posted by: Shadows 06-Sep-2004, 09:20 PM
The format that the above poem is displayed does not do it justice... the words of my original dance on the page.

Posted by: Aaediwen 06-Sep-2004, 10:34 PM
I read it in the edit window where your formatting held, and I agree that it's much better that way smile.gif Quite nice. I tried re-posing a reply that would properly format it, but it seems as if the <PRE> tag no longer works ? I know I used it quite a bit when I started posting my own, as I believe in using the formatting on the page like this. will keep looking and if I find a good way to format it properly then I'll re-post it here for you smile.gif


Update: I found *a* way to do it. I don't think it's quite as clean as having it flat in the post like you did above, and as I'm used to posting such things, but at least it restores the formatting. See my next post for the results, is this how you envisioned it, my friend?

Hey paul; is there a way you could slip in here to allow the use of the <PRE> tag for things like this?

Posted by: Aaediwen 06-Sep-2004, 10:38 PM
QUOTE (Shadows)

I pause,

              scratch my chin,

                                            wonder aloud.

Visions dance,

                            minds wander,
               
                                                        and the world goes on.

How,

          why,
 
                      and should it be ?

Peace?

            War?

                        Humanity?

Visions Dance!

                        Dance with me.

Posted by: Shadows 07-Sep-2004, 08:02 AM
Yeap ! Thanks Aae that is how it should be.

It can be read stairstep or column... the message is different in each way!

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