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Posted by: Celt 23-Jun-2008, 04:49 PM
i'm no one's prince nor even knight
though in my dreams i someday might
be seen as someone's shining star
give comfort through the darkest hour

and how to catch that maiden fair?
whose sparkling eyes and flowing hair
are always with me so it seems
within my heart and pauper's dreams

poetic lines are just a start
i've built a castle in my heart
formed from love not bricks or stone
a castle she can call her own

© 2008 meh

Posted by: Lady of Avalon 23-Jun-2008, 04:57 PM
Celt,

What a beautiful declaration of love here. But it seems that the maiden
doesn't hear or know about it!!!!

LOA

Posted by: Celt 24-Jun-2008, 03:18 AM
Thank you for your kind words. If only the fair maiden were not blind to me...

Posted by: John Clements 24-Jun-2008, 06:20 AM
I like it.
JC

Posted by: Camac 24-Jun-2008, 07:54 AM
QUOTE (John Clements @ 24-Jun-2008, 07:20 AM)
I like it.
JC

Me too.

Camac.

Posted by: gaidlhigagusbeurla 24-Jul-2008, 08:47 PM
beautiful

Posted by: Leelee 24-Jul-2008, 09:15 PM
A breathtaking, lovely peom thumbs_up.gif Thanks for sharing biggrin.gif beer_mug.gif

Posted by: valpal 59 25-Jul-2008, 08:25 AM
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