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Posted by: John Clements 22-Sep-2008, 10:44 AM |
Can’t you see the emptiness Deep with in your mind A vacuum sealed in ignorance Where fear it does reside It can’t be seen by x ray Nor even MRI’s A void that only fade away In time as it goes by So gaze into a mirror No vanity in mind And hopefully you’ll see it Ahead of your demise PS: I’m sorry for being so morose, (but as you know), it’s hard to find something good to write about these days. (This has been slightly revised since I first posted it). JC |
Posted by: Camac 22-Sep-2008, 01:48 PM |
JC. Good one . I like it. Camac |
Posted by: marti64 25-Sep-2008, 04:49 PM |
I agree exactly, John!!!!! Marti |
Posted by: Leelee 25-Sep-2008, 05:48 PM |
Very good, John |
Posted by: Aaediwen 25-Sep-2008, 06:35 PM |
nice nothing wrong with being a little dark. It can be good for the soul sometimes. Gets the darkness out to let the light shine through. |