I would love some critiques on this poem!
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From nothing, something From chaos, order From crushing defeat, victory From here, there's nowhere to go but up Rising from the ashes of obscurity To the flames of joyous victory That's what so many hope to achieve From the bottom, there's nowhere to go but up From an idea, reality From a hope, victory From beginners, champions We had nowhere to go but up
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Dance for life!
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