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Posted: 10-Sep-2005, 12:23 PM
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HI IM Blane fron tbay ont and 42 have no idea what im doing so heres 1 of my poems lol

What Was Said

I CAN REMEMBER WHEN I USE TO SMILE
IT WAS THE LAST TIME I SAW YOUR FACE
I GUESS IT HAS BEEN A WHILE
NOW WHERE I AM IS JUST A PLACE

THE SUN WAS MUCH BRIGHTER THEN
THE STARS SEEMED TO DANCE SO HIGH
BUT THE SUN WILL NOT SHINE AGAIN
AND THE STARS ARE TEARS IN THE SKY

IS OUR LOVE GONE AND DEAD
I'M SORRY I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO
THESE ARE THE WORDS SHE SAID
AND EVERY SINGLE ONE WAS TRUE

OF COURSE THE SUN IS NOT AS BRIGHT
BECAUSE LIKE ME IT MISSES YOUR SMILE
AND THE REASON THE STARS CRY AT NIGHT
IS THEY TOOK OVER FOR ME A WHILE

AND NO OUR LOVE NEVER DID DIE
AND I'M SILL HERE IN THIS PLACE
I THINK THE STARS WOULD NOT CRY
IF I COULD JUST SEE YOUR FACE

SWEETHEART COME ON HOME TO ME
MAKE MY HOUSE A HOME INSTEAD
WITH YOU IS WHERE I WANT TO BE
AND THAT'S THE ONLY THING HE SAID

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Posted: 10-Sep-2005, 04:11 PM
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I welcome another wordsmith to the forums smile.gif You have a wonderful piece here, and I'm sure you'll enjoy your time here. feel free to start yourself a thread in Celtic Hearts smile.gif Let me know if you want to start one specific to your writings, and I'll pin it smile.gif


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Posted: 11-Sep-2005, 08:40 AM
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Welcome to the forum Blane! I hope you enjoy the music as well as the wonderful people here.. I loved your poem..


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Posted: 11-Sep-2005, 09:05 AM
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QUOTE (lllll_blane_lllll @ 10-Sep-2005, 09:05 PM)
ty im happy you liked it . not sure what you mean by thread lol i take it thats a good thing biggrin.gif if you think i need 1 then ok ty
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smile.gif A very good thing. Such as your intro thread here smile.gif
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Posted: 12-Sep-2005, 03:43 AM
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Welcome Blane,

I think you will find a lot of nice people here and a great place to try out your poetry.


O'h Yea the Music is great too. biggrin.gif


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Posted: 12-Sep-2005, 07:02 AM
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Welcome to the forum. You will enjoy it hear. There are alot of great people here.


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Posted: 12-Sep-2005, 06:02 PM
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Welcome, Blane. Very good piece, I enjoyed reading it. Seems to want to be a song, huh? I can hear it being sung.

Enjoy yourself around here. Lots of great people, and some good writers to keep you company too. biggrin.gif
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Posted: 13-Sep-2005, 04:39 PM
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QUOTE (stoirmeil @ 12-Sep-2005, 07:02 PM)
Welcome, Blane. Very good piece, I enjoyed reading it. Seems to want to be a song, huh? I can hear it being sung.

Enjoy yourself around here. Lots of great people, and some good writers to keep you company too. biggrin.gif

You too eh? I figured maybe it was just because I was cranking Nightwish when I read it. I think it'd be good with a rock beat behind it. Maybe even Metal.
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Posted: 13-Sep-2005, 08:46 PM
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Hi Blane! Welcome to CR! Lots of nice people and great music here. I hope you grow to love it as much as I have!

Welcome to the family! smile.gif


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