One Of My Poems, beautiful place in Galloway Scotland

[Maxie]

Dawn on Auchenlarie

Bonnie auchenlarie wakes from sleep
All the creatures from the woodlands take a peep
At a sinking moon and a rising sun
And the shimmering laughing sea

Rabbits run by me and tease me into chase
While the pinkness of the light falls on every flower's face
And the sea-birds fill the sky with dancing flight
I am breathless from the salty air
And every sense is stunned

By every sound and sight: mountains cast a gentle shade
On swirling hills and such a wildness overhangs the glade
And the craggy towering cliffs are strong
Against the first warm rays of gold
And the tiny pebbled cove

Yellow and red, blue and mauve: scents intoxicate and bless
The heart with peace and loving tenderness
Even berries on the hedgerows cast a glow
On everything before them like jewels in the sun
Their encrusted beauty is so fair

Its influence is everywhere and smells so fresh and sweet
Like perfumed pine in the searing summer heat.

Although all human heads are still at rest
This little world is at its best giving birth
To a new day. The wind picks up to catch the spray
And bonnie Auchenlarie blows my mind away.

[sisterknight]

amazing...it need a soft lilting tune under it!!!!then it would really blow the mind...you can feel the wind on the skin