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WizardofOwls 
Posted: 04-Mar-2006, 01:13 AM
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By Allen R. Alderman

When did I become so jaded,
My life so neatly filed?
When did I lose the joy that's found
In the eyes of a child?

So many unimportant things
Have drawn me far away.
They've stripped me of my child-like faith
And kept the joy at bay.

They've made me cold and, to my shame,
Have left me full of doubt;
They've let this world of sorrow in
And shut my Jesus out.

Restore the joy, the simple faith.
That child-like quality
That strips away the fear, the doubt,
And helps me to believe:

Believe in things I cannot see.
Like love that never fades;
In hands that gently lift me up
And wipe the tears away.

Breathe life once more upon this clay,
Change old to something new,
Soften my cold and icy heart
Renew my faith in You.


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Sln agus beannachd,
Allen R. Alderman

'S i Alba tr mo chridhe. 'S i Gidhlig cnan m' anama.
Scotland is the land of my heart. Gaelic is the language of my soul.
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Posted: 04-Mar-2006, 10:06 AM
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I'd say see the last line for a title...
"Renew My Faith"

It's pretty smile.gif A little rough in a couple spots in my opinion, but quite pretty.


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Posted: 04-Mar-2006, 11:56 AM
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"A Prayer for Renewal"


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Dear Lord, lest I continue in my complacent ways, help me to remember that someone died for me today. And if there be war, help me to remember to ask and to answer "am I worth dying for?" - Eleanor Roosevelt

The ultimate result of shielding men from the effects of folly is to fill the world with fools.
-- Herbert Spencer, English Philosopher (1820-1903)
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Posted: 06-Mar-2006, 05:55 PM
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"Finding my Balance"

Like in my Signature.


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May your days be filled with Merriment and May you walk in Balance with Creator.

"For every day you fish, you live another day"
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Posted: 07-Mar-2006, 09:24 AM
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sounds more like a grown-up's lament to me....if it were my choice I'd probably name it "Innocence Lost" or something like that.


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Cha chir drn a thoirt an aghaidh pig.
A kiss ought not to be met with a fist.

Thig crioch air an saoghal, ach mairidh gaol is cel.
The world will pass away, but love and music last forever.

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Posted: 07-Mar-2006, 09:43 AM
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Posted: 07-Mar-2006, 11:25 AM
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the child in me




what wonderful thought provoking words, makes me think about the loss of my wide eyed wonder of the world round and the beauty that can be found within if only i choose to look closer.thank you wiz


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Posted: 23-Aug-2006, 12:14 PM
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Allen,
I really like Anthony's suggestion on this one.....

"Renew My Faith"


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Fading days of blue rush past your eyes.

Is e iomram an droch latha a n latha math gu iomram.
Practice rowing in a rough sea and soon the rough sea will seem calm to you.
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