Do what you can while you can here
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| Posted by: Alilvna15 15-Dec-2005, 08:36 PM |
| Here is a poem that I wrote a little bit ago.... If Only I Could Go to Heaven Written by: Pansy Walker(one of my book names) If only I could go to Heaven, There would be no more pain or hurt. I could be embraced in the arms of God Without the embaresment to ask. If only I could go to Heaven, I would be free of teary eyes, And all my problems, sins, and stains, Would be washed away. If only I could go to Heaven, There would be no more disrespect, All of God's angels would treat me as Their own. If only I could go to Heaven, I would be loved, and no one, No one, Would care who I used be, or what I did. If only I could go to Heaven, I would plead for just one thing, To be left here on earth to attest for my faith. What I could do, I don't know. If only I could be more of a witness, Maybe I would do something right. I can't have my wish just yet, For there is still work to be done. If only I could be more of a witness, And spread my Lord's word, Then, only then, can I say... If only I could go to Heaven. If anyone wants to comment it on it...then feel free to do so please! |
| Posted by: WizardofOwls 15-Dec-2005, 08:56 PM |
| Nice! I like it! I echo your sentiments! Sometimes it would be so nice to just go on home where all the suffering will be over, but then you remember that there is so much work still yet to do... Thanks for sharing! |
| Posted by: John Clements 16-Dec-2005, 09:21 AM |
| If you want to go to heaven, I would suggest that we all try not to repeat our mistakes, and create heaven right here and now, because I believe that’s about as close as we’ll get. Slàinte, John Clements |
| Posted by: Aaediwen 16-Dec-2005, 08:06 PM |
| nice statement. The last lines read a little rough, but it's a really nice statement. Do what you can while you can here |
| Posted by: Alilvna15 17-Dec-2005, 01:32 PM |
| Yes, the last few lines might be a little rough, but it is only a rough draft. After I wrote it down, I really didn't do much else to it. |