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| Posted by: lllll_blane_lllll 10-Sep-2005, 12:23 PM |
| HI IM Blane fron tbay ont and 42 have no idea what im doing so heres 1 of my poems lol What Was Said I CAN REMEMBER WHEN I USE TO SMILE IT WAS THE LAST TIME I SAW YOUR FACE I GUESS IT HAS BEEN A WHILE NOW WHERE I AM IS JUST A PLACE THE SUN WAS MUCH BRIGHTER THEN THE STARS SEEMED TO DANCE SO HIGH BUT THE SUN WILL NOT SHINE AGAIN AND THE STARS ARE TEARS IN THE SKY IS OUR LOVE GONE AND DEAD I'M SORRY I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO THESE ARE THE WORDS SHE SAID AND EVERY SINGLE ONE WAS TRUE OF COURSE THE SUN IS NOT AS BRIGHT BECAUSE LIKE ME IT MISSES YOUR SMILE AND THE REASON THE STARS CRY AT NIGHT IS THEY TOOK OVER FOR ME A WHILE AND NO OUR LOVE NEVER DID DIE AND I'M SILL HERE IN THIS PLACE I THINK THE STARS WOULD NOT CRY IF I COULD JUST SEE YOUR FACE SWEETHEART COME ON HOME TO ME MAKE MY HOUSE A HOME INSTEAD WITH YOU IS WHERE I WANT TO BE AND THAT'S THE ONLY THING HE SAID Copyright ©2004 |
| Posted by: Aaediwen 10-Sep-2005, 04:11 PM |
| I welcome another wordsmith to the forums You have a wonderful piece here, and I'm sure you'll enjoy your time here. feel free to start yourself a thread in Celtic Hearts Let me know if you want to start one specific to your writings, and I'll pin it |
| Posted by: Rindy 11-Sep-2005, 08:40 AM |
| Welcome to the forum Blane! I hope you enjoy the music as well as the wonderful people here.. I loved your poem.. Slainte |
| Posted by: Aaediwen 11-Sep-2005, 09:05 AM | ||
A very good thing. Such as your intro thread here |
| Posted by: Madadh 12-Sep-2005, 03:43 AM |
| Welcome Blane, I think you will find a lot of nice people here and a great place to try out your poetry. O'h Yea the Music is great too.  |
| Posted by: cynni 12-Sep-2005, 07:02 AM |
| Welcome to the forum. You will enjoy it hear. There are alot of great people here. |
| Posted by: stoirmeil 12-Sep-2005, 06:02 PM |
| Welcome, Blane. Very good piece, I enjoyed reading it. Seems to want to be a song, huh? I can hear it being sung. Enjoy yourself around here. Lots of great people, and some good writers to keep you company too. |
| Posted by: Aaediwen 13-Sep-2005, 04:39 PM | ||
You too eh? I figured maybe it was just because I was cranking Nightwish when I read it. I think it'd be good with a rock beat behind it. Maybe even Metal. |
| Posted by: WizardofOwls 13-Sep-2005, 08:46 PM |
| Hi Blane! Welcome to CR! Lots of nice people and great music here. I hope you grow to love it as much as I have! Welcome to the family! |