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Posted by: rhatcher1313 28-Jun-2007, 05:56 PM

And if I go,
while you're still here...
Know that I live on,
vibrating to a different measure
-behind a thin veil you cannot see through.
You will not see me,
so you must have faith,
I wait for the time when we can soar together again,
-both aware of each other,
Until then, live your life to its fullest.
And when you need me,
Just whisper my name in your heart,
...I will be there.

Posted by: Lady of Avalon 28-Jun-2007, 06:49 PM

Your poem is very spiritual and deep.

And I believe the same as well that our beloved ones that are not of this world anymore are waiting somewhere for us to join them in another lifetime.

Thank you for sharing that lovely poem.

Posted by: Aaediwen 28-Jun-2007, 06:58 PM

Nice imagry

Makes me think of a couple similarly nice lines written by a friend of mine:

QUOTE

When you're here, and I'm gone, I know you'll have the strength. The strength to carry on.

When I'm gone, and you're here, just remember darling that I am always near

Dartmoor (aka Haldur) -- "Northwest"

Posted by: TandVh 28-Jun-2007, 07:37 PM

writing to/for a loved one is a true language of poetry. opening the viel for love is pure poetic power and we, as humans are so capable of this that even the angels marvel.

Posted by: rhatcher1313 28-Jun-2007, 09:49 PM

When I penned this poem, i used a bit of poetic "license" to create, had no idea how this would interpretated, guess it's a all a matter of perspective, it can be seen many differant ways, as the Man in me says: "Beware The fury of a patient Man"
Thanks all !
rhatcher1313

Posted by: Donajhi 29-Jun-2007, 06:08 PM

Very beautiful.......Thanks for sharing.

Posted by: Drothgord 12-Jul-2007, 12:12 AM

That is just so incredible beautiful

I will write that down so i can read it again some day.
I can feel that the poem comes right from your heart, and that is how it always should be in poetry.