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greenldydragon 
Posted: 23-Oct-2004, 01:07 PM
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I use the word attempts on purpose. These are poems I wrote for school, and thought I'd share them:

Days Gone By

Her mind strays back to days gone by,
The pain of her body far away.
Her arms relax,
her breathe gets shorter,
but she doesn?t notice
that she is slipping away.

Her mind is on the days gone by,
with the brilliant sparkling sun.
Blue eyes dance back out at her,
as her young heart thumps,
and her newly smooth skin glows
with the excitement of youth.

Her mind is on the days gone by,
accompanied by the winter freeze.
The cackle of the fire,
the shadows spread by its soft light;
the warmth of the companion
to her right.

Her mind strays back to days gone by,
The pain of her body far away.
Her arms relax,
her breathe gets shorter,
but she doesn?t notice
that she is slipping away.

One more: (The first two lines were given to me to start the poem with)

Torment and Anguish


The acid dripped slowly
onto her pale skin.
Her flesh already raw
from her recent beating.

Tears crowded into her eyes,
forcing her to blink,
lest she cry.

Her once beautiful face,
marked with time and grief
where only youth should play.

Her golden locks twisted
into her mouth to keep
her pain silent.

The gritty chains of rope
attaching her wrists
rotten from wear and tear.

Her face is set,
so as not to show the pain,
inflicted by the slow steady droplets
of acid on her skin.


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Aaediwen 
Posted: 24-Oct-2004, 08:09 AM
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Nice smile.gif I like the image in the first one... A sad one. Memories... Looking back on a life of memories, while slowly fading away. away from society, away from friends, away from yourself, away from life.


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greenldydragon 
Posted: 30-Mar-2006, 06:12 PM
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Here's a new one which I turned in for a writing thing at school:
Sacrifice
I look around
and all I see
are made up faces
pretending to be..

The needed, sacrifice,
willing, to give their life,
to have the broken dream
be brought back from the stream..
Of despair...

The beauty, masks the
secrets hiding
behind the fake veneer
stretched tight across the fear of...

Needing to sacrifice,
the earnings of their hard lives
For the profit of those
willing to hide..
The truth of their life.
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John Clements 
Posted: 07-Apr-2006, 10:33 AM
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To paraphrase you from Torment and Anguish, the tears crowded my eyes, upon reading Days Gone By.

greenldydragon, youíve got it going onÖ

Thanks,
John


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