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> One More Poem- "gold"
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Posted: 02-Jun-2006, 02:18 PM
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hope you also enjoy this one....

my Gold Tiger, beautiful, purring boy,
sometimes honey sweetness can destroy.
this is both madness and ecstasy.
i am the prisoner of your memory.
i dream i walk on water red as blood,
stained-glass window sky above.
i strain to hear your silky voice across the waves.
i seek your eyes like lighthouse beacons.
odd Black Bird, me, i charmed you.
i put on the mask of a Dove.
feigned irreverence,
in secret I bask in the glow
of your gaze...passionate, fiery.
your love is intense
its radiation
makes ugly black feathers singe...
and naked and afraid,
Gold Girl steps forward from the fallout.


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Aaediwen 
Posted: 02-Jun-2006, 05:50 PM
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Nice sound to it. I'm seeing a mix of several images from it, none of them really that clear, but all quite compelling. There's the paradoxical concept of a catalyst harming that which logic says it should bolster. Then there is the saddening image of a distant love. And finally, the idea of a character's comming of age or a similar type of transformation. Some nice food for thought there smile.gif


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