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Posted: 06-Sep-2004, 09:13 PM
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I pause,

scratch my chin,

wonder aloud.

Visions dance,

minds wander,

and the world goes on.

How,

why,

and should it be ?

Peace?

War?

Humanity?

Visions Dance!

Dance with me.


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Posted: 06-Sep-2004, 09:20 PM
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The format that the above poem is displayed does not do it justice... the words of my original dance on the page.
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Posted: 06-Sep-2004, 10:34 PM
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I read it in the edit window where your formatting held, and I agree that it's much better that way smile.gif Quite nice. I tried re-posing a reply that would properly format it, but it seems as if the
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Update: I found *a* way to do it. I don't think it's quite as clean as having it flat in the post like you did above, and as I'm used to posting such things, but at least it restores the formatting. See my next post for the results, is this how you envisioned it, my friend?

Hey paul; is there a way you could slip in here to allow the use of the
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Posted: 06-Sep-2004, 10:38 PM
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QUOTE (Shadows)

I pause,

              scratch my chin,

                                            wonder aloud.

Visions dance,

                            minds wander,
               
                                                        and the world goes on.

How,

          why,
 
                      and should it be ?

Peace?

            War?

                        Humanity?

Visions Dance!

                        Dance with me.
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Posted: 07-Sep-2004, 08:02 AM
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Yeap ! Thanks Aae that is how it should be.

It can be read stairstep or column... the message is different in each way!
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