Slowly getting step by step closer to getting my story done I think. It needs so much.... I was going to do other short stories about Schiana and things she does during the course of the story... Think I'll write them anyway and see if I can weave them into the story itself.
Antagonist needs to be more antagonising
Need a name for her group of followers
New name for na sidhe.... So unoriginal just reanslating, even if most people would be clueless.
Need to actually add the title into the file too... Pheonix of the Sea
Hope to leave for Pennsic in the morning.